| This page . . . hmm . . . well the first Collamair is great. I love him. Box four, with Faylin's eye, I'm also very pleased with. Then, the bottom half of the page. When I drew it, I hated it. I really thought I could have done this in a better way. But I colored it just to see, and I liked it a little more, but still, I don't like the word box. It's just, gah, I dunno, not right, not what I wanted. It's just all I could think of to not make this reliving the past thing drag out for 52 pages. |
What is Colly doing to Faylin in box five??? |
We need some motion lines. Thrusting motions lines or something. He is getting ass-fucked after all!! *coughs* Excuse me... I'm going to go now. |
